Consonance is the relationship between words in which the final consonants in the stressed syllables agree but the vowels that preceded them differ. A form of repetition used in prose and poetry. (A Handbook to Literature)
Consonance Writing Exercise
Choose a section of summary narration you are currently revising and would like to make more lyrical. Spend a few minutes reciting the section aloud. Listen to the pattern of the syllables. Study the intended effect of the language. Does the section want a languid sort of flow or a more Stacatto effect? If the former, consider replacing the diction with words that use soft sounds in the stressed syllables: b, d, f, s, m, n…. If the latter, consider replacing the diction with words that use hard sounds in the stressed syllables: t, k…. After revising the diction, read the section aloud, again. Does the change in diction affect your intended atmosphere?
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