from SOME SEXUAL SUCCESS STORIES: PLUS OTHER STORIES IN WHICH GOD MIGHT CHOOSE TO APPEAR by Diane Williams

Not typically considered a magical realist writer, Diane Williams’ stories do often play in the odd and weird spaces of reality. Primarily a short short story writer (flash or micro shorts) “The Dog” and “The Man” offer a fantastic and compact example of how one might subtly weave the surreal and/or magical realist moments into very real landscapes. In these examples, we see how the writer can use overlapping identities in order to create a sense of larger surreality and socio-political layerings within linked stories and/or a longer work.

The Dog

She had every reason to think that he had had a good time with her when he licked thoroughly with his strong tongue the perviate parts of her body. She was in bed when he did this. He was her best friend.

When she awoke the next morning, she smelled the sweet lilac and the roses in her garden–she was aware of the thump of his tail–and felt a breeze spring in through the window screen.

She ate a small piece of fish for her breakfast. She hummed a little tune to herself–and when she opened a drawer, she observed an old crumb from some food in there and she thought, this is unbelievable. 

Her husband, Frank, came in for his breakfast. Frank is clever, of course. 

She said to Frank, “Sit!”

Really, she could not understand at that time why Frank didn’t.

The Man

It was the best week of his life. I wasn’t there for much of it. He used to try to copulate with my boyfriends when they’d come to the house and he’d chase around and chase around. He’d come when I called his name, and I would go wild screaming his name until he came running to me faster than I could ever run, so I’d sink to my knees sometimes to get down on his level with him, with his excitement, which was often running rampant. His bed was filthy where he rested and slept. He ate with gusto, made a great noise and drank what he drank with a power to drink I will not ever forget. He influenced me a lot.

 

Diane Williams is the author of several excellent collections of short stories, including Some Sexual Success Stories: Plus Other Stories in Which God Might Choose to AppearExcitabilityRomancer Erector, and many others. She is also the editor of the literary journal Noon

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Rae Cline is the author of PRECIOUS UGLY, a debut novel (coming August 18, 2026 from 7.13 Books). She is also the author of the short story collection The Indefinite State of Imaginary Morals. Her stories, essays, and prose poetry have appeared in The Paris Review, McSweeney’s, and more. She earned an M.A. in Writing from John Hopkins University and an M.F.A. in Fiction and Creative Nonfiction from American University. A teacher for thirty-five years, she taught writing and literature at the secondary level as well as at her alma maters, the International Writing Program at Iowa State University, and other campuses. She is the founding editor of Eckleburg, where she writes the Openings column, and the founder of the Warm Words Project, a homeless and domestic violence outreach initiative. Born in Ohio, she now splits her time between New York City and the Gulf of Mexico. PRECIOUS UGLY is now available for preorder. Read more at raecline.com.